I breathe you in
Suspire you...
Those giddy spins
swirl in the air
I suck you
Deep into me
As if a nicotine desire
or herbal withdrawal
I suck you
with rabidity...
You are
My daftness and my
Adrenaline, embodied
I breathe you in...
take you in so deeply
that you became
My scent...
My wind...
You turn into
The sweet lullaby
That runs through my head
And echoes
Its pleasant chorus.
I breathe you in
Like a delicate wine
and feel
Myself sigh
and quiver…
From the dizziness of
The high.
I Breathe you in
With both, prurient
and saintly
inspirations.
I feel my
blood cells race
and Stiffen
And flow with
the flitter of
unseen butterflies, as I
ideate gardens of
earthborn joys.
True that I breathe you in
Like carbon monoxide
Not aware if
Your aroma
will arouse or kill
Slowly. I breathe you
Into me...
give you a role in my
Blood flow's story
And so I
Si-i-i-i-i-iigh
till you sting
A cigarette…
that skids through my arteries
giving me wings to
The High of Heaven.
Replying to The High…
Resonating to The High
Smiling to The High
While I dance at the bottom
Every time, I cease my sight
To slowly
Deeply
Breathe
You
In…
13 comments:
awesome is the word...
so thats how every smoker feels :)
brilliantly described.
It makes you high and forget about the worries, though momentarily. So careless that we even neglect what is written in bold. The statuary warning of it being a killer.
Yet, it could be like love, irresistible once you fall for it.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
I JUST KNOW completely what you were trying to say here! Sharing this!
Write more often :)
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Stupendously amazing. Everything from the vocabulary to the image you created with it is astounding. It totally gave me the feeling I know of what it is like. Also loved the title.
Do read Cigarettes And Ashes
aha! Lovely ... so well expressed .
A long time back I wrote something similar for my photoblog too
http://rainboy.aminus3.com/image/2010-11-08.html
Take care ...
hey I think tis was really cool
I've written an incomplete 'cigarette poem' myself
fumes...lovely... :) :)
hmm,, nIce.. so InterestIng..
UPDATE please!! :)
Nice Poem..
Sutta jahan aa jaye vahin maja aa jata hai.. :P
a lovely one, thoughtful, surely.
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