Thursday, June 17, 2010

77-Fiction: Child labor

Note:- 77 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 77 words. 


That day, kitty party was in her posh bungalow. Every single detail of the party was flamboyant.

They spoke highly on how child labor must be stopped, that such kids desperately need love, education, and care . They took an oath not to employ one. At the end, they raised a toast for the homeless children


When done, with his diminutive hands and hopeful eyes, he rushed to the kitchen to clean up the mess...


Poor Chotu!

8 comments:

Karan Agrawal said...

Hey nice 77er... Good narration, story built up and the climax!

D2 said...

Loved the irony. People can be such hypocrites.
Really well written.

Mr. "Niraj" Lemon said...

harsh reality...its just the other face of society

rainboy said...

we can never get rid of child labor in India ...not in distant future :(

Unknown said...

child labour is actually a constitutional faliure nd raisin toast wont help..
datz d reality.

Viyoma said...

Feel really sad for Chotu and the likes!!
Nice post!!

s said...

Beautiful!!!!

Surbhi Jain said...

@karan Thanks :)

@D2 Hypocrites are such a disgrace to the society!

@Niraj The other face seems to be horrifying :P

@rainboy But we can always take it positively and think about combating it. As they say,"Charity begins at home". so lets start with ourselves.

@neha Yes... hypocrisy is the cause!

@Viyoma Thanks! Keep visiting :)

@s Thanks! Hope to see you around!