Monday, June 21, 2010

77 fiction


Note:- 77 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 77 words


There was abuzz all over the place. Everyone in the family was excited. Special arrangements were done to welcome today’s guest. Rajat was introducing his fiancée to his family today and they were going to marry soon. 

The door bell rang.

Everyone quickly settled down while Rajat went to open the door.
He welcomed the guest with a kiss. Everyone was shocked at first sight.

Rajat introduced the guest as they entered, “Hi everyone… He is Rahul.”



15 comments:

Savira Gupta said...

The shock of their lives!

D2 said...

hilarious...
must have shocked 'em out of their shoes!

Anonymous said...

Liked it...
Nice to c u on my blog....

Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said...

Nice one, but tried one...

I may sound harsh here, but buddy, i would like you to take leaps... i mean your potential is more than this...

You can hit the dot of the bull's 'i'...

am waiting for your next 77er . :) :) :)

Karan said...

A good one. A nice read @ 1 am .

Anonymous said...

Heeeeee shocking for their family..........

Keep Writing

Anonymous said...

OOOpppps!

S said...

This really cracked me up, perfect for the mood am in! No,not gay things but making a joke out of everything! Nice attempt! LIKES and LAUGHS:D

ad said...

liked it surbhi....
:)

Surbhi Jain said...

@Savira hehe..

@D2 Truly said!

@vipul thanks!

@Mahesh I am glad that you point it out! I'll definitely come up with a better one next time!

@karan hehe... Thanks!

@Vijay hehe.. yes.. It must have been!

@Nehha lol..

@Sourav I was wondering what the first line of your comment meant before I read the next one :D

@Jay Thanks!

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Blasphemous Aesthete said...

a shocker for anybody who hasn't the least idea, I went through the graffiti before, so unfortunately was anticipating it.
Nice one, I want to laugh it out, I found it a little funny.
"Jab Miyaan Biwi raazi to kya karega kaazi"... though it needs some alteration here, but I hope it fits.

Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete

Surbhi Jain said...

@witty jester Hi.. I would love to drop by an e mail soon!


@Anonymous oh yes.. In case you go through the graffiti first, you ought to anticipate it well enough ;)

DuDo said...

Hey, it was a gr8 read!!!


Well m happy 2 c Mindblowing award (started by me) on your blog... You deserve it!!!

Keep Blowing

Regards

DuDo
www.dudoism.blogspot.com

Surbhi Jain said...

@Dudo Thanks alot! Your encouragement gave me such a boost :) Keep visiting!