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You love him
He doesn‘t love you back. You need him
He doesn't need you back
He leaves
And all you do is
Wait.
For him to take notice
For him to call you once
Just cling onto all the memories, all the fun times
Force your needs upon him
He suffocates, He quits
And you still don’t stop haunting his lives.
He doesn't wanna make things messy
But does he understand you?
Does he realise
What does he mean to you?
And then realization strikes
And start your desperate attempts to act
like you don’t care..
But the truth remains
Its all hidden there in you.
No matter how many parties you attend
how many vodka shots you gulp
No matter how much you bitch
You tell yourself that you ‘deserve better’
No matter how much you stare at the screen of your phone
And how many hours you stand at the door
No matter how much you wish with all your heart
That you could hear from him one last time..
He doesn't trace his path back
And you continue your endless directionless wait
Every passing day....
P.S. To every girl who still waits,
Yes, patience is a virtue. But do you deserve being treated like that?
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27 comments:
Never..!!
:)
That's too touchy. A common feeling...you've put them nicely into words:)
I like your postings. I believe that if you wait the right person will come along and miracles can happen.
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awww.. That's so true.. Been there.. Done that.. I know what it feels like.. :|
A lot of sense in these words, wish things were that easy. Takes a lot of pain to go through the phase.
Sometimes it is tough to accept that things just aren't meant to be. And sometimes, no matter how bad you want something, you gotta let it go.
That's when it gets harder to breathe.
@Lena I know it takes time to let it go and it's not at all easy.. But eventually, things become easy! All you need is will power to go on :)
awwww!apt
Awww that was so touchy and so true :(
We dont deserve to be treated that way...but we the emotional fools the great .
Loved the simplicity in ur write :)
I wish i had words to comment!!
Yes, its all hidden inside and there's only hope that it will vanish smday.
You have written in the most simple words; yet they travel deep inside the reader's soul!!
Wonderful!! Kp writing!!
Life is too short for waiting .... You've put it so well - and so simply. Lovely
hey... lovely!! my post is about the same hidden feelings, but how it was dealt differently.. loved ur view of the hidden things!!
http://whitefridayandsnowblack.blogspot.com/2010/06/hidden.html
That was a real message conveyed through some brilliant use of words. I like it! :)
All the best for BAT!
Hidden...in love with me and life! :)
i think words for my comment will stay hidden itself! wonderful work! :)
Leo - Hidden
I could relate to this very well! You took me back to my past with this post! Strong writing.. that's what I would call this.. All the best :)
Well written,even better is the way you have put such abstract thoughts into words.
But,if i may,u really didnt have to exclude the male gender from all such emotions.
N trust me,those who do not understand your silence will never understand your words.
Simply... Nice work ;)
Whoever said 'women' move on in life quicker than men do and don't need any sort of indulgence to get over the bitterness, here's an eye opener!
NO WAY! One should not let oneself to be treated like a 'door mat'!
Liked this a lot :) Good luck with BATOM :)
Raksha - Hidden
i love this! it felt like reading a perfect description of myself! excellently written...one of my favorite entires :)
very nicefully done...
No gal deserves to be treated like that...
liked it
Beautiful ! PS said it all :) True...all girls through , yet you are the only one who have put it so beautifully ! :) All the best for BATOM :)
you don't have to wait...but girls choose too....and there lies the difference... its like saying we should wait for the river to run in our direction...hullo...take a dip in the flowing current...don't wait for the flow to change!!!
So true!
Very nice.
ATB for BATOM
Gkam: Hidden
Really? And what about every guy who is still waiting?
PS: http://bit.ly/thestupidgirl
simple and crisp words but the impact is heavy and large...
loved your pragmatic take on the happening wait....
original and honest post...
i guess it holds true for many people, both gals and boys....
loved it :)
gud work buddy....
Interesting thoughts.
I could relate to the post. I am doing the same...wait for him and the worst part is he doesn't even know that I'm waiting.
The sense of pain is well composed, liked it.
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